can anyone listen?

[Cip]

I made an acoustic diddy yesterday and wanted some comments. For whatever reason the quality sounds way better through headphones then it does through speakers. Anyways any comments are greatly appreciated.

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[Wind]

Really dig it, very modest mousey

[GummyBearOfDoom]

I really loved it, post more.

[Cip]

I really loved it, post more.

thanks alot, I have a myspace with a few more. www.myspace.com/3headedboy

Im not sure if you'll like them but whatever.

[Ceraziefish]

This is some cool stuff. I'm diggin' it.

[ROCKSTEADY]

I thought it was great, the lyrics need a little more poilsh i think, but other than that, it sounds fucking great.

[Cip]

thanks, guys

I thought it was great, the lyrics need a little more poilsh i think, but other than that, it sounds fucking great.

what would you suggest, the lyrics were actually about my girlfriend, yeah sound the corny alert.

[ROCKSTEADY]

not really the content, i just thought the rythm was kinda off in some spots. In reality i guess its just my opinion, other people would probably like that style :hardgay:

[Cip]

not really the content, i just thought the rythm was kinda off in some spots. In reality i guess its just my opinion, other people would probably like that style

ah yea it may just be the style I sing, pretty much every note I hit was deliberate, either way Im glad you have a problem with it, its better than not saying anything.

[Chris]

I'm not as into this type of music as you are, but I really enjoyed it. I liked the chorus, mostly because of the way you sing the word 'yard' and how that progresses to 'fall'. It's like it rhymes but it doesn't. You know what I mean?