Wind Posted March 6, 2006 Share Posted March 6, 2006 Well I noticed in artie (DarkStar 64)'s AE profile he had a link to a science fiction story he's writing. Hope he doesnt mind that im posting the link, but I figure it's a better way for people to read his stuff and tell him what they think. I just got done with chapter 1, and although theyres grammer, spelling errors and whatnot it's still a pretty cool little story. Gonna finish off the other 3 chapters posted thus far. http://www.freewebs.com/thefifthsystem/index.htm (DarkStar 64 is a kid from my school, so thats how I know em) Also, by reading it, the story seems to be highly influenced by star trek wankery. I could be wrong, so I'll let him post his main inspirations for this.. but it reminded me of it alot. Link to comment
John Posted March 7, 2006 Share Posted March 7, 2006 I just got done with chapter 1, and although theyres grammer, spelling errors and whatnot LOL @ W1ND Link to comment
Wind Posted March 7, 2006 Author Share Posted March 7, 2006 Artie's the man! I told him I read chapter 1 when he passed by me in the hallway. He looked a mixture of confused and emberassed. lol Link to comment
Wind Posted March 8, 2006 Author Share Posted March 8, 2006 He must masterbate over star trek. Which makes em even cooler. I say we invite him to hang out friday night and watch star trek movies. Link to comment
Artie Posted March 9, 2006 Share Posted March 9, 2006 He must masterbate over star trek. wtf? yea it is very influenced by Star Trek although it is not related to star trek at all. yea well my spelling and grammar (spelling?) sucks. meh, that is jsut a rough thing. i am writing chapter 5 now. meh, i am changing alot too. and yea i do post, just not alot. Link to comment
Artie Posted March 11, 2006 Share Posted March 11, 2006 sry for the double post but i changed the domain for my site. it is now http://www.thefifthsystem.tk Link to comment
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